First I would tell them to change the part about being endowed by their creator. As you seen right here some people's creator had jokes. Second the about life, liberty and pursuit of happiness. Well they should had made a little disclaimer about marriage drying up the life, liberty and kills happiness. Atleast for my first marriage it did. Third they should made it bold print where we can kick out our goverment and stuck to that. I mean hell we haven't had a great goverment since Billy boy. And what made it so good with him was the Monica tales. We need more presidents like him. He was normal people. Also come on Benjiman Franklin? I would have said "you need to just keep on flying kites there boy. Leave the thinking stuff to professionals." I mean this guy was allowed to sign one of the most important documents of our country. This guy, the guy who flies kite with keys tied to them during lighting storms.